Body Paragraph Tips
Citing Conventions
Example:
Wigglesworth depicts a world full of complacent debauchery: "Wallowing in all kind of sin, / vile wretches lay secure" (lines 8-9).or
Wigglesworth depicts a world full of complacent debauchery:
Wallowing in all kind of sin,
vile wretches lay secure:
The best of men had scarcely then
their lamps kept in good ure (Lines 8-11)The "security" of the sinners is, of course, part of their sin.
My Comments
Squiggly lines under a sentence or phrase means more work is/was
needed to smooth out wording.
The best way to improve your writing is to 1) run a rough draft by myself or one of the tutors in the college's writing center (R124) or 2) 1) run a rough draft by myself or one of the tutors in the college's writing center (R124) ("Hey . . . this looks just like the first tip. . . ")